Highlights of Student Writing

These are selections of student writing from the student magazines and class work in the English classes at Oikos University. These students did wonderful work in developing their own natural voices through freewriting, peer conversations, revising and editing. When students write about something they really care about, their hearts write with eloquence. I hope you enjoy these as much as I do.

  • Ever since I can remember, pink has been the color that I love the most. Everything I have is all pink: clothes, shoes, bags. Even my bedroom is pink. The meaning of pink in my style is relationship and life.. The power of pink helps the mind in healing…

  • While we were enjoying dinner in front of the fireplace, I saw something magical outside the cabin: Snow was falling! It was like white feathers or maybe really slow white rain coming down. We heard it falling, a very soft pattering sound.

  • A father confronts by his son’s attraction to new, shocking video games – and learns to respond as a father.

  • The truth about a relationship is revealed by the little details of their final encounter.

  • Wonderful memories of a great weekend vacation become the scene of horror a month later.

  • Dear Phil, Was it fair or unfair for you to repeat the day that you didn’t want…? …it was fair because you needed to learn some lessons to become a better person…  you were lustful, and you never loved anyone but yourself. This is unacceptable!